Dream Deep

^ 2/10 Sorry Ink... the dimensions are pretty off though... *hides*

Well... you have got a penchant for the taboo, Till - but there's nothing wrong with that. Taboo isn't vile, after all, it's just forbidden. And a bit daring. As ...

Let me begin, Misty, by telling you that you've got a wonderful writing style. I tend to cram too many words into a piece, overflow it with length and convolution. ...

^ 8/10 ^_^

Notes on character and plot - as commanded. ;) As I've read all of your chapters, I'll give you the general rundown here, rather than the line-by-line. Action : - ...

The Imp must have posted this while I was away, I didn't get the chance to look at it before. ^_~ So here I am, pressed for time but glad ...

It seems that I have arrived a bit late: everyone else has already covered much of the spectrum and left me with some puny wanderings here to add to the ...

I hope you're not banking too much on my leveling stability - could put us all on the losing end of coherent thought. ^_^

I wrote this while I was in adoration, and I just heard the line "Your time is not my time, but my time is Yours." The poem escalated from there. ...

Glorious Pepsi... ^_^

*was similiarly shanghaied* ... a while ago, and now that I've returned from exile, I very much look forward to critting this. ^_~ I've printed it out and will read ...

Sure thing, Till, I'll work on that for the next chapter - forgive the line-by-line, then, Chapter Two's crit shall be gloriously decked out in a confusing jumble of overall ...

Ah - well, now that you explain it , I understand better. ^_~ I think Anxiety would work nicely. (Sorry I missed the saliant nuance.)

Alas - DD has wandered about the forums and found her way to Secrets. ^_~ I'm going to start back at Chapter One, if you don't mind, and work my ...

... And I'm back for more. Looks like you won't have to come poke me after all? And then it's on to Misty's story and Till's, and I pray to ...